Week 31 – Student A’s Response: 1st Draft


The First Draft- In this paper, Student A moved her ideas from the outline into paragraphs.  She decided to hand write the paper, which is fine, but as you can see, it’s a good six pages double spaced.  Most, if not all, of the work you have seen so far is done in class.

You will see diacritical marks making changes to the paper.  This is from the Clang Session.  She handed her paper to a reader who read her paper back to her.  As she listened, she made changes to her paper and the reader wrote them down.  Those changes will then show up in the second draft.

1st draft tree
1st draft tree 2
1st draft tree 3
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