Week 32 – Student B’s Offering

I’ve uploaded more student papers.  This student wrote his compare and contrast paper on Sherlock Holmes and Scrooge.  It has the same rubric as before.

Let’s see what he’s done.

And the contrast brainstorm:

Then the plot development chart. For some reason we are missing one of the plots.

Then the outline. Notice that he has chosen to outline conclusion directly after introduction.

Then the first draft:

Then the second draft:


And for some reason we are missing the final page…

Then the third draft:

Then the Personal Skills Record:

Then the final draft:

And finally, the Rubric with the final grade:

And there it is! A job well done. A paper I think most high school students would be proud of.